All MALL ITEMS names and descriptions fixed. |Suggestions| Items, names, descriptions

Dakaran

It's a give or take on this one. I 've read the descriptions in the game again and most likely alot of what is written below does follow the sense and suggest good things but not all is perfect I went through the review mostly following our work while I was busy on the guide but i will review and change them one last time when i push the update for the guide.

At least this makes some suggestions and fix on spelling, descriptions and such. While some guild items descriptions I think they are mighty fine but just fixing the structure around the words God or Creator would already make a big leap in the right direction.

I hope it helps out MWO.

Hot Sale

Magic Anvil: A special anvil used to forge green metal mine
Bliss Experience Stone [S]: A mysterious crystal that increases your experience gained by 30 percent. The effect will last even while you are offline. If you die, the effect will disappear.
Rare Purple Diamond: A precious item composed or traded for other special items
Heroic Wealth: You will get 2 millions gold pieces when you open this package
Ordinary Mount Egg:  Right-click to hatch it in your mount socket. Hatching may take a while (Mount Eggs in the Mall will have an additional attribute).
Hatching Formula Potion: Accelerates the hatching of the mount egg, hatching it within 5 minutes. You can use it after you have equipped yourself with a mount egg.
Juvenile Digestive Potion: It will make your child mount instantly feel hungry; making it quicker between each feed time.
Juvenile powder [normal]: You can randomly get magic powders in stacks of 10 of one type of powder that include normal, fine or perfect.
Juvenile powder [senior]: You can randomly get magic powders in stacks of 10 of one type of powder that include perfect, excellent or fantastic.
Juvenile Growth Potion: Use it at the last feed as an additive before your child mount levels up. It MAY increase your mounts attribute beyond the normal growth. This effect will happen based on a percentage.
Juvenile Clever Potion: Use it at the last feed as an additive before your child mount levels up. It will increase the rate at which it will successfully master the hidden attribute by a certain percentage.
Condensed HP potion[s]: Recovers 600 hp every 2 second, lasts 6 seconds
Condensed MP Potion[s]: Recovers 600 of MP every 2 second, lasts 6 seconds
Magic Fight: You will get a fighting formula of a specific type manufactured by Hogwarts Institution. The effect will last for one hour.

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New Arrivals

Perforating Crystal: It gives you an 80% chance to get an additional socket for an armor +4 and 20% chance for an armor +5.
Burning Point Crystal: This vigorous crystal permanently increases your growing weapon's life-burning points by one.
Blessed Crystal [s]: It slightly increases the chances of success to enhance your growing weapon.
Soul-Protect Crystal: Use it when enhancing your growing weapon. Life-burning points remain the same when a failure occurs but your growing weapon’s level will go down by one level.
Intensified Crystal: It increases your armor’s enchantment level by one. The basic attributes such as defense and magic defense will also increase. The higher the level, the lower the success rate to raise the level of your item’s enchantment. Your items will be lost when a failure occurs.
Senior Intensified Crystal: It increases your armor’s enchantment level by one. The basic attributes such as defense and magic defense will also increase. The higher the level, the lower the success rate to raise the level of your item’s enchantment. Your items will NOT be lost when a failure occurs.
Attribute Protective Stone: Use it to protect the attributes of your armor items when enchanting them.  The attributes will remain the same even when a failure occurs.
Cracked Destiny Stone [B]: It will randomly change the attributes of blue quality weapons and armors under level 24. Items have 20% chances to disappear.
Destiny Stone [B]: It will randomly change the attributes of blue quality weapons and armors under level 42. Items have 20% chances to disappear.
Destiny Stone [B+]: It will randomly change the attributes of blue quality weapons and armors under level 48. Items have 20% chances to disappear.

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Teleportation

Mnemonic Symbol [group]: Use this symbol to return to a city, and then return to your first location.
Senior Mnemonic Symbol: Use this symbol to return to a city, and then return to your first location. Can use 9 times per item before it disappears.
Friendship Wing: A friends list will appear that will enable them to instantly teleport themselves to you or you to them. Can be used only once per item.
Vestige Scroll [S]: Teleports a single player to Sandie King Vestige I.
Vestige Scroll [T]: Teleports a team to the Sandie King Vestige I – Only usable by the team leader.
Benthal Scroll[s]: Teleports a single player to the Benthal Vestige Portal.

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Combat

Experience Storage Signet Wrap [S]: You will get an Experience Storage Badge that can store experience accumulated up to [3,000,000]. This badge will take all the experience points earned by your character while you have the badge equipped.
Experience Storage Signet Wrap [M]: You will get an Experience Storage Badge that can store experience accumulated up to [30,000,000]. This badge will take all the experience points earned by your character while you have the badge equipped.

Bliss Experience Stone [S]-quantity 20: Use this mysterious crystal to increases your experience by 1.3 times. The effect will last even if you are offline. If you die, the effect will disappear.
Repair Oil-quantity 10: Use this oil to recover the durability of all of your equipments.
First Aid Package-quantity 10 [S]: Recovers 2100 hp every 2 seconds, last 6 seconds.
Mental Stimulant[S]-quantity 10: Recovers 2100 mp every 2 seconds, last 6 seconds.
First Aid Package [M]-quantity 99: Recovers 2100 hp every 2 seconds, last 6 seconds.
Mental Stimulant [M]-quantity 99: Recovers 2100 mp every 2 seconds, last 6 seconds.
Wisp of HP Potion [S]-quantity 99: Recovers 600 hp every 2 seconds, last 6 seconds.
Wisp of MP Potion [S]-quantity 99: Recovers 600 mp every 2 seconds, last 6 seconds.
Wisp of HP Potion [M] -quantity 99: Recovers 1000 hp every 2 seconds, last 6 seconds.
Wisp of MP Potion [M]-quantity 99: Recovers 1000 mp every 2 seconds, last 6 seconds.
Condensed HP Potion [M]-quantity 999: Recovers 600 hp every 2 seconds, last 6 seconds.
Condensed MP Potion [M]-quantity 999: Recovers 600 mp every 2 seconds, last 6 seconds.
Magic Fight: You will get a fighting formula of a specific type manufactured by Hogwarts Institution. The effect will last for one hour.
Protective Medal: Keep it in your package to prevent your items from dropping on the ground when you die.  Used only once, disappears upon the death of your character.
Expiation Scroll [S]: Reduces evil points by 1,000. You cannot use it when your evil points are below 3,000.

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Guild War Spoils: Increases guild experience by 5,000 and is accessible only when a guild building is under construction.
Guild Repair Mace: Use it to repair a worn-out guild stone.
Guild War Proclamation: Use it to declare a war against another guild.
Non-warring Crystal: It automatically leaves you in a non-warring state by placing it in the guild warehouse when other guilds declare a war against you, last one day.
Peace Stick[S]: A guild cannot challenge or be challenged by others after using this. The effect will last for 3 days. Only the Guild President can use it, and he must use it before the guild receives a challenge. [Usable once a week]
Guild Scroll [S]: Teleports you back to the Guild Stronghold. You must use it in a neutral map.
Guild Resource [Stone]:  You will acquire 100 stones.
Guild Resource [Wood]: You will acquire 100 woods.
Guild Resource [Mercury]: You will acquire 100 mercury.
Guild Resource [Crystal]: You will acquire 100 crystals.
Guild Resource [Sulfur]: You will acquire 100 sulfurs.
Pass Check [Team]: Those players who possess it are entitled to enter the Dark Fort. Note: The players must be in a team to use this item.
HP Spring: Increases your Maximum HP by 30% for 1 hour. Its effect will last even while you are offline. [Usable only in the Dark Fort]
MP Source: increases your Maximum MP by 10% for 1 hour. Its effect will last even while you are offline. [Usable only in the Dark Fort]
Magic Defense: increases your Physical Defense by 300 points, last one hour. Its effect will last even while you are offline. [Usable only in the Dark Fort]
Champion Power: Increases your Physical Attack by 300 points, last one hour. Its effect will last even while you are offline. [Usable only in the Dark Fort]
Heroic Shrine: Increases your Skill Attack by 300 points, last one hour. Its effect will last even you are offline. [Usable only in the Dark Fort]
Deva Light: Increases all your character attributes, last one hour. Its effect will last even while you are offline. [Usable only in the Dark Fort]

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Fun

Denaturation Potion: Use it to change the gender of your character.
Transmutation Stone[C]: It will randomly transform you into a common monster of the Magic Continent.
Transmutation Stone [NPC]: It will randomly transform you into an NPC of the Magic Continent.
Transmutation Stone [Boss]: It will randomly transform you into a boss monster of the Magic Continent.
Wedding Gift Package [I]: It contains two sets of Wedding Dress, a Normal Betrothal Gift and some Fireworks to celebrate the wedding.
Wedding Gift Package [II]: It contains two sets of Wedding Dress, two Groomsman's Dresses, two Exquisite Betrothal Gifts and some Fireworks to celebrate the wedding.
Wedding Gift Package [III]: It contains two sets of Wedding Dress, two Groomsman's Dresses, two Bridesmaid's Dresses, two Abundant Betrothal Gifts and some Fireworks to celebrate the wedding.
Invitation Card (I): Purchase this card to send an invitation for your wedding to your friends and other players. It allows you to receive Betrothal Gifts (I).
Invitation Card (II): Purchase this card to send an invitation for your wedding to your friends and other players. It allows you to receive Betrothal Gifts (II).
Invitation Card (III): Purchase this card to send an invitation for your wedding to your friends and other players. It allows you to receive Betrothal Gifts (III).
k. Invitation Card (IV): Purchase this card to send an invitation for your wedding to your friends and other players. It allows you to receive Betrothal Gifts (IV).

Divorce Petition: Deliver this petition to the Marriage Register to apply for a divorce.
Title Deed level 1: The lease contract for a level 1 residence. The contract will last 60 days.
Title Deed level 2: The lease contract for a level 2 residence. The contract will last 60 days.
Moving Tools: Use this tool to move the furniture in your house, wears out gradually.

Meteoric Fireworks: You will show your affection and care to your lover by releasing these magnificent fireworks.

Starry Fireworks: Ignite the small fireworks to ripple your mind and soul into the sky-starred night that comes into force upon this beautiful sight.

Wholehearted Fireworks: Your lover will be proud of your sincerity when it witnesses your true love. It is eternally evergreen as it engraves your love upon your bones with this unforgettable memory!

Flashing Fireworks: The colorful flames over your head seem to forebode that everybody will put their attention toward happy affection.

Fragrant fireworks: You feel exceptionally reminiscent of your previous love as the instantaneous feelings press on to you.

Wish Firework: To make a vow to God in anticipation of the downpour of happiness. As long as you wish to make it come true, you will see the perfect results.

Romantic Fireworks: Is a flame dancing? Alternatively, is your heart beating rhythmically? Are you ready to experience the passion reigning inside of you?

Mutual-love Fireworks: To nestle and cuddle each other, we witness the moment when the mutual-love. These fireworks flare inside each other's hearts.



Simple descriptions of fireworks:

Meteoric Fireworks: Use it to show your affection and care to your lover by releasing the magnificent fireworks in the sky.
        q. Starry Fireworks: The black sky will be filled with stars when you use it.
        r. Wholehearted Fireworks: Use it to show sincerity to your lover.
        s. Flashing Fireworks: Use it to show happiness and affection to others.
        t. Fragrant fireworks: Reminiscent your previous love.
        u. Wish Firework: Use it to make a wish for happiness.
        v. Romantic Fireworks: Use it to show compassion to the one you love.
        w. Mutual-love Fireworks: Use it to show true love to each others.

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Dakaran

I personally think the descriptions more colorful and what you tried to achieve with the fireworks is cool and fun but it needs just a bit of fixing in the grammar to make perfect sense and add the beautiful colors you had in mind.

I'm trying to compose the sentences correctly but I'll leave it to you for the fireworks since it's a personal choice of poetry. I would love to see those kind of descriptions completed, and I believe it brings flavor to the game.


Coming up later this week the full names and descriptions of every weapons and armors in the game fixed.

Credits to Rikatozi who is helping me to sort this out. He worked on the frame of the sentences and the descriptions then I finished with the editing of every items. We're currently 3 writers working actively on the guide, and looking for the last person. This help became much appreciated as I have so much work to do with this guide.

Seeyas,

Dakaran.

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jane

Thank you very much.

Dakaran

Hi Jane xD!

You're welcome ;p

Seeyas,

Dakaran.